Alice there is a good level of research and planning evident so far. To secure the highest band you must improve the way in which you present your 3 front covers/contents/dps - the actual level of detail could be a little more in depth too. Try to explore uktribes in more detail too as your comments on this are far too brief. Look through the rest of your posts for more comments. Overall a decent effort well done!
You must upload the following: *the mock up magazine you created in Mr Smith's lesson *the front cover and contents of the prelim school magazine you created * explanations/thoughts/analysis of these tasks Remember that without the prelim you will be deducted marks!
The 25 word pitch creates a good overview of your genre, and the effects you will use when editing your photography. I also feel your target audience is of a good age gap, and that from researching in depth you will fit your content around what the will like. To improve, make an animato or powtoon to ensure it is more interesting to look at, and brings a more diverse way of presenting research,
I like how your 25 word pitch makes it clear as to what your magazine is about. I like how specific the age gap for the target audience is and how each picture goes well with your word.
Your 25 word pitch gives a good overview of your magazine, however you do need to add more detail for example gender etc. Your target age fits well with your genre and main aim for your magazine. I would pay £2.00 for your magazine. I feel that more detail is needed in order for you magazine to be as best as it can be.You have a really strong idea here, well done.
I like the idea that you plan to have much fashion in your magazine. The use of images helps me identify which look you are going for to achieve this. I am interested to see how you will link an indie magazine with fashion. I would pay £2.00 for your magazine. To improve, reconsider the way you have published your 25 word pitch. Using another application such as Prezi keeps audiences intrigued and it looks more approachable and professional.
I like how you have been specific with what sort of fashion style you are including in your magazine. I also like how you've shown your inspiration, to improve your pitch you could present your words and images in a more creative way just to make it more interesting. I would pay £2.50 for your magazine
I like how you have clearly identified the sort of clothing and musical inspirations for your magazine and that you have a good understanding of the type of audience you are aiming to sell at. I would pay £2.00 for your magazine. To improve, I think that to engage your audience, use sites like Prezi to present your information.
Alice there is a good level of research and planning evident so far. To secure the highest band you must improve the way in which you present your 3 front covers/contents/dps - the actual level of detail could be a little more in depth too. Try to explore uktribes in more detail too as your comments on this are far too brief. Look through the rest of your posts for more comments.
ReplyDeleteOverall a decent effort well done!
You must upload the following:
ReplyDelete*the mock up magazine you created in Mr Smith's lesson
*the front cover and contents of the prelim school magazine you created
* explanations/thoughts/analysis of these tasks
Remember that without the prelim you will be deducted marks!
The 25 word pitch creates a good overview of your genre, and the effects you will use when editing your photography. I also feel your target audience is of a good age gap, and that from researching in depth you will fit your content around what the will like. To improve, make an animato or powtoon to ensure it is more interesting to look at, and brings a more diverse way of presenting research,
ReplyDeleteI like how your 25 word pitch makes it clear as to what your magazine is about. I like how specific the age gap for the target audience is and how each picture goes well with your word.
ReplyDeleteYour 25 word pitch gives a good overview of your magazine, however you do need to add more detail for example gender etc. Your target age fits well with your genre and main aim for your magazine.
ReplyDeleteI would pay £2.00 for your magazine.
I feel that more detail is needed in order for you magazine to be as best as it can be.You have a really strong idea here, well done.
I like the idea that you plan to have much fashion in your magazine. The use of images helps me identify which look you are going for to achieve this. I am interested to see how you will link an indie magazine with fashion.
ReplyDeleteI would pay £2.00 for your magazine.
To improve, reconsider the way you have published your 25 word pitch. Using another application such as Prezi keeps audiences intrigued and it looks more approachable and professional.
I like how you have been specific with what sort of fashion style you are including in your magazine. I also like how you've shown your inspiration, to improve your pitch you could present your words and images in a more creative way just to make it more interesting. I would pay £2.50 for your magazine
ReplyDeleteI like how you have clearly identified the sort of clothing and musical inspirations for your magazine and that you have a good understanding of the type of audience you are aiming to sell at. I would pay £2.00 for your magazine. To improve, I think that to engage your audience, use sites like Prezi to present your information.
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